Okay, I get that some people don't agree with how I have written Bulma in Cold Comfort, and in A Taste of Heat.
Granted I'm not perfect writing VxB fics but seriously? What sort of a name is .,.,.,., anyway?
Here was their review- on A Taste of Heat
Reviewed By: .,.,.,., On: January 09, 2012 08:05 EST
Comment/Review:
honestly? I'm really tired of reading about a sluttish Bulma. Cant anyone come up with something original?
Bulma has not been a pure as driven snow angel. Sorry.
And not a few hours later this review on Cold Comfort
Reviewed By: ,.,.,. On: January 09, 2012 11:35 EST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read some awful shit before but this takes the crown. What a weakling Bulma you made here. She would let Yamcha make her into a slut just because she loves him? She's lonely? What a load of shit and OOC.
Okay I get it. I get you don't like how I write Bulma. Fine. BUT PLEASE LEAVE your real USERNAME when you review? Is it THAT much to ask? I can understand the basis for your complaint but 'load of shit and OOC' isn't constructive crit.
Sorry to whine but it's just common courtesy to at least give me some idea how to make the story better than this?








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"I'm a warrior, not a variety of flower!" --Vegeta.
"Well you SMELL good!" -- Bulma
"Do you understand, will you sacrifice... will you take the Oath... will you live your life... under the rose..." KISS Elder album
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"I'm a warrior, not a variety of flower!" --Vegeta.
"Well you SMELL good!" -- Bulma
"Do you understand, will you sacrifice... will you take the Oath... will you live your life... under the rose..." KISS Elder album
--
"I'm a warrior, not a variety of flower!" --Vegeta.
"Well you SMELL good!" -- Bulma
"Do you understand, will you sacrifice... will you take the Oath... will you live your life... under the rose..." KISS Elder album